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Sentence Structure

Question 6 • AISD English IV 2026_27 Sem B

Which is the best way to correct the comma splice in the following sentence?Jolene ran at top speed, her hair blowing in the wind, the crowd cheered wildly.

Answer
A
Jolene ran at top speed, and her hair blowing in the wind, and the crowd cheered wildly.
B
Jolene ran at top speed, her hair blowing in the wind, and the crowd cheered wildly.
C
Jolene ran at top speed, so her hair blowing in the wind, so the crowd cheered wildly.
D
Jolene ran at top speed, her hair blowing in the wind but the crowd cheered wildly.

Explanation

The sentence has two complete thoughts: “Jolene ran at top speed” and “the crowd cheered wildly.” Joining them with “and” fixes the comma splice. The middle phrase, “her hair blowing in the wind,” is a descriptive phrase, not a complete sentence, so choice B correctly keeps it between commas and adds “and” before the final clause.

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