Using Resources and Reference Materials for Editing Answers

Compare your revisions to the model paragraph by completing the following sentence. I made of the same revisions.

Which of the following revisions did you include while rewriting the passage? Check any of the boxes that apply.I removed the dangling preposition.I removed the gendered pronoun.I made the listed items parallel.I added the Oxford comma.I added sentence variety.I changed the passive voice to active voice.

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Hazelwood School District v. Kuhlmeier was a Supreme Court case, and the court ruled on it in January 1988. It was a crippling blow to students’ First Amendment rights, and I am writing to protest it. The court held that school officials have the final say on public school newspapers, and students cannot complain when the paper is published as part of a class. for decisions made for political reasons, principals are allowed to censor student newspapers, and they can get away with it. This censorship is prior restraint, and I do not it.

Which sentence type is used the most in this student’s passage?

What effect will repeating the same sentence structure most likely have on readers?